首段
①Asisapparentlybetrayedinthedrawingsabove,描述图画②Themoststrikingfeatureis(图画重点信息)
③Thereisnodoubtthatitssymbolicmeaningsubtlyconveyedshouldbegivendeepconsideration.二段①Asissymbolicallyrevealedinthesetofdrawings,thefeatthat(重复上面图画信息).Profoundlyindicatesthat主
题ismomentousandfundamentaltoanyonewhoundertakesgreatdeeds.
②Undoubtedly,Itis主题thatkeepsuscontinuallydoingsomethingvaluableandadmirableinspiteofdifficulty,that
makesusstillfullofenergytofacethecomingchallengesandcompetitionandthatoffersusthefoundationforthecomingsuccess.③AsfarasIamconcerned,thereareseveraladvantagesthatcanbegivenasbelow.④Initially,nothingismorebeneficialthan主题toovercomeourdefectsandimproveourefficiency.⑤Onanotherlevel,noissueisasgoodas主题tomakeourlifemorecolorfulandenergetic.⑥Nobetterillustrationofthisideacanbethoughtthantheexamplementionedbelow.⑦Apersonwhois(…)willmakeamessjustbecausenoonecanbeproficientinallthethings.⑧Onlyby(……)canyouputyourcapacitiesintofullplayandcanyoubethewinnerinthesociety.三段
①Fromwhathavebeendiscussedabove,itadmitsofnodoubtthatindoingthingswhethergreatorsmallthereare
moreorlessdifficulties,itismuchbetterforonetoinvolveyourselfintoa主题.②However,itiseasiersaidthandone,practiceisthemostimportantfactor.③Onlywhenyoupayattentiontoitcanyoumakeitbettersoonerorlater.
消极型、批判危害性的框架
首段.①Asisapparentlybetrayedinthedrawingsabove,图画内容,whichseemstobehumorous/ridiculous/……(可改)butthought-provokingonsecondthoughts.②Themoststrikingfeaturethatimpressesmedeeplyisthatunbelievably,图画意义所指.③Recentfewyearshaswitnessedaphenomenonof主题whichseemstobedisastroustoindividualsurvivalandprosperity.(可改)④Thisphenomenonof主题shouldbecondemnedseverelyormadeillegal.
⑤Thereisnodoubtthatitssymbolicmeaningsubtlyconveyedshouldbegivendeepconsideration.第二段
①Toaccountfortheabove-mentionedphenomenon,severalseriouseffectshavebeenputforward.②Initially,主题notonlyresultsdoesharmtoourphysicalandmentalhealthbutalsoresultsinafrustratingandhumiliatinglife.③Onanotherlevel,nothingismoreharmfulthan主题tocontradictwithaharmonioussociety.④Nobetterillustrationofthisideacanbethoughtthantheexamplementionedbelow.⑤(可改)AccordingtoasurveymadebyChinaDaily,63.9%of(大群)whohaveeverexperienced主题willliveadull
lifeorevenfeellessofhopeaboutthefuture.
⑥Ifwecannottakeusefulmeans,wemaynotcontrolthistrend,andsomeundesirableresultsmaycomeout
unexpectedly,wewillseethegloomyfutureof(something).第三段①Fromwhathavebeendiscussedabove,itistherefore,necessarythatsomeeffectivemeasuresaretakentoprevent主
题中之问题.
②Ononehand,weshouldbesensibletostrengthentheenforcementofthelawstoprotect(something).③Ontheotherhand,itisdemandingforustokeeppeopleawareoftheimportanceofsavingsomebodyoutoftheevil
handsofdestruction.④However,itiseasiersaidthandone.Practiceisthemostimportantfactor.
⑤Althoughthefightagainstitislong-standingandtremendousone,oureffortswilleventuallypayoff.⑥Onlywhenyouattentiontoitcanyous