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DearDavid
Howareyoudoing?Ihavehadagoodtimeinthissummer.IhadvisitedtheTaishanwithmyclassmatesthatisthehighestmountaininShandongProvince.
WearrivedthebottomoftheTaishanwithtoldmanyjokes.Thewaystogotothemountainisdiffculty.Althoughtiredwewerewedidn'tgiveup.Weovercamemanydiffcultswithpassersbys'help.
Finally,wearrivedthetopofTaishan,andmanybeautifulscenesinoureyesthatwofeltveryhappy.
Now,I'vetoldmyexperienceofthissummer.Howaboutyou?I'mlookingforwardyourreply!
DaerDavid
Howareyou?I'mwritingtheemilefellyouaboutmysummervacationtravel.
IwithmyfriendwenttoTaishaninthesummervacation.TaishanisthehighestmountainsintheShandongProvince.ItalsofamousallaroundtheCHINA.Wearedelightedintravel.Themountainpathisdifficultforuswalking.Althoughweareveryhauseted.Wedon'tupthetime.Eventually,wearrivedthemountainpeak.Theenvironmentiswell.Welookedalotofvarityplants.Suchas,flowers,greentrees.Althoughwedon'tknowitnames.