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求标题为《建议》的英语作文,最好是高一水平的,字数也要适度高一的
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求标题为《建议》的英语作文,最好是高一水平的,字数也要适度高一的

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  1.建议信(ALetterofSuggestion)   expressyourwishtobeavolunteer.DearWangQishan,   IamaseniorinPekingUniversity.The2008BeijingOlympicGamesiscomingintwoyears.Afterwatchingthe2004AthensOlympicGames,Icannothelpwritingtoyou.   Firstofall,hereismysuggestionforthepreparationworkofthe2008BeijingOlympicGames.Theconstructionworkofthesportsbuildingmustbecompletedintimeaccordingtothecontract.InAthens,theswimmingstadiumwasnotaccomplishedintimesothattheeventhadtobeheldintheopenair,whichhasbroughtnegativeeffectontheperformanceofathletes.Inoneword,toprotecttheinternationalimageofChinaandensuretheOlympiccompetition,wemustfinishourpreparationworkwellandintime.   Lastbutnotleastimportant,Iwanttoexpressmywishtobeavolunteer.Inthefirstplace,itisthedutyofeveryChinesetodohisbitforthe2008OlympicGames.Inthesecondplace,Ihaveagoodcommandofforeignlanguages.Icanspeak   2.   AsuggestiontomyEnglishteacher   MyEnglishteacheristhemosthard-working(最高级+复合形容词的运用,不错!)teacherIhaveeverseen.(定语从句,可以尝试用同位语哦,比如theelegantlady,myEnglishteacher,isthemost…)Duringherclass,shetellsusalltheknowledgesheknows.Shealsoanswersourquestionsaspossiblyasshecan.(这句前可以用现在分词作状语,Beingpatient,shealso…)Withthehelpofmyteacher,myEnglishimprovesalot.   However,sheissostrictwithusthateveryoneisscaredtotalktoher.(so…that…结构用的好!)SoIsuggestthatmyteachershouldbegood-temperedtous.Besides(除了…的表达方法?)topreparethelessons,sheistootired.Agoodrestisnecessary.   Ihopeourteachermaytotallychangeafterseeingthesesuggestions,(这里的suggestion要注意不能用复数,前文也只能提及一个建议,多拓展.比如Ifmyteacherisgood-tempered,itisbeneficialnotonlytoherhealth,butalsotoherpopularity)   ByWangLin   Asuggestiontomyphysicsteacher   Physicsismyfavouritesubject.NonethelessIalwaysfallasleepwhenIamhavingphysicslessons.BecauseitissoboringthatIcan’thelpsleeping.Notonlymebutalsomyclassmatesdootherthingsduringtheclass.SoIamgoingtogiveasuggestiontomyphysicsteacher:tomaketheclassmoreinterestinginordertoattractsstudents.Theywilllistentotheteachermorecarefullythanbeforeandmakeprogress.IreallyhopeIcandobetter.   Ø内容充实,先说明提出建议的原因,自然地过度到建议.结尾稍显单薄.可再补充些(IsincerelyhopethatmyphysicianteachercantakemyadvicesothatIcandobetterinclass.)   ByGaoRuilin   Asuggestiontomypoliticsteacher   Withthetimepassingbyandthedevelopmentofmodernscienceandtechnology,(第一句和文章并无大关系,放在这里略显牵强)politicsismoreandmoreimportanttoday.However,Ialsohaveasuggestiontomypoliticsteacher.(also放在这里合适吗?)WeareGradeNinestudentsandwearereallybusynow.(可用can词组,weareGradeNinestudentssothatwecan’thelpbutbebusywithourlessonsnow.)Shouldwedon’treadnewseveryday?(情态动词不可以和助动词放在一起哦!)IttakesmemuchtimeandIcan’tstudyonothersubjectsbetter.(这两句可以换种说法,informativeasreadingnewsis,ittakesmetoomuchtimeandIamnotabletofocusonothersubjects.)Inaddition,Iknowhowimportantthepoliticsis(感叹句作宾语从句,不错!)andIwillreviewthecurrent(可以说recent)events.AndIhopeteacherwillacceptmysuggestion.   BySunBowen   Iwant(to)givemyEnglishteacherasuggesti
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