DearDavid
I’minSenior3nowandI’mpreparingforthecomingcollegeentranceexamination.I’msureIcananswerallthequestionsinNMETexceptthewriting.IhaveputmyheartintoEnglishwritingbutIstilldon’tknowhowtowriteagoodcomposition.WhatshallIdo?Youknowthecollegeentranceexaminationisveryimportant.I’mgettingmoreandmoreworriedwiththetimepassingby.SoIwanttogetsomehelpfromyou.Ibelieveyouarekindenoughtohelparen’tyou?ThecompositionattachedtotheEmailisoneofmine.Wouldyoupleasecorrectitpointoutthemistakesandtellmehowtoimprovemywriting?Thankyou!
Yours
LiuMing
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