Peoplewhoholddifferentviewmaybewillsay,ifstudentsdotakeuppart-timejob.
Peoplewhoholddifferentviewmaybewillsay,ifstudentsdotakeuppart-timejobthattheymaynothaveenoughtimetostudy.
持不同见解的人可能会说:如果学生做兼职,他们可能没有足够的时间来学习或休息.
英文文法意思上是否有误?